Forum Pakistan - Pakistani Forums
Pakistani forum, where you can discuss freely on all issues from khabrain, muqabaley, cricket, khail, film, dramay, shair shaery, safar, batein, muhabat kay qissay, warzish, sehat, rozee, akhbar, siasat, naukary ghar pyaar dokan aur karobar gupshup.
|
|
|
| Author |
Message |
|
|
SHUMULUSUYING
Full PK Member


Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 141 Location: China |
|
| Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again |
|
Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again
--by Xu Zhimo
Very quietly I take my leave
As quietly as I came here;
Quietly I wave good-bye
To the rosy clouds in the western sky.
The golden willows by the riverside
Are young brides in the setting sun;
Their reflections on the shimmering waves
Always linger in the depth of my heart.
The floatingheart growing in the sludge
Sways leisurely under the water;
In the gentle waves of Cambridge
I would be a water plant!
That pool under the shade of elm trees
Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky;
Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds
Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream?
To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream
To where the green grass is more verdant;
Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight
And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight.
But I cannot sing aloud
Quietness is my farewell music;
Even summer insects heep silence for me
Silent is Cambridge tonight!
Very quietly I take my leave
As quietly as I came here;
Gently I flick my sleeves
Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
xuzhimo was a great poet in china , maybe you did not konw him . his poetry always gives people fresh and natural feeling . this poet was composed in chinese when he left Cambridge first time after two years study in Cambridge university. then his wife translated it into english .
how about this poetry ,friends?
_________________ I am manchu , you know the manchus ? not important, we can be friends |
|
| Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:44 am |
|
 |
loje
Members Helper


Joined: 14 Jan 2008 Posts: 2465 Location: Saudia Arabia |
|
| |
|
Wow Its Really Refrishing
its really nice poem
For Sharing 
_________________
 |
|
| Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:38 am |
|
 |
SHUMULUSUYING
Full PK Member


Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 141 Location: China |
|
| |
|
 |
 |
Wow Its Really Refrishing
its really nice poem
For Sharing  |
in fact the front translation is not standarble .
how about this ?
Goodbye Again, Cambridge!
I leave softly, gently,
Exactly as I came.
I wave to the western sky,
Telling it goodbye softly, gently.
The golden willow at the river edge
Is the setting sun‘s bride.
Her quivering reflection
Stays fixed in my mind.
Green grass on the bank
Dances on a watery floor
In bright reflection.
I wish myself a bit of waterweed
Vibrating to the ripple.
Of the River Cam.
That creek in the shade of the great elms
Is not a creek but a shattered rainbow,
Printed on the water
And inlaid with duckweed,
It is my lost dream.
Hunting a dream?
Wielding a long punting pole
I get my boat into green water,
Into still greener grass.
In a flood of starlight
On a river of silver and diamond
I sing to my heart‘s content.
But now, no, I cannot sing
With farewell in my heart.
Farewells must be quiet, mute,
Even the summer insects are silent,
Knowing I am leaving.
The Cambridge night is soundless.
I leave quietly
As I came quietly.
I am leaving
Without taking so much
As absp; piece of cloud.
But with a quick jerk of my sleave
I wave goodbye.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
it is more beautiful in chinese (chinese wrote it in chinese )
----------------------------------------------------------------------
轻轻的我走了,正如我轻轻的来;
我轻轻的招手,作别西天的云彩。
那河畔的金柳,是夕阳中的新娘;
波光里的艳影,在我的心头荡漾。
软泥上的青荇,油油的在水底招摇;
在康河的柔波里,我甘心做一条水草!
那榆荫下的一潭,不是清泉,
是天上虹揉碎在浮藻间,沉淀着彩虹似的梦。
寻梦?撑一支长篙,向青草更青处漫溯,
满载一船星辉,在星辉斑斓里放歌。
但我不能放歌,悄悄是别离的笙箫;
夏虫也为我沉默,沉默是今晚的康桥
(you don't understand )
_________________ I am manchu , you know the manchus ? not important, we can be friends |
|
| Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:55 am |
|
 |
SHUMULUSUYING
Full PK Member


Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 141 Location: China |
|
| |
|
in fact , i do think chinese is more delicated, detailed, accurated.
english can not express some feelings exactly , english is yonung ,chinese is old (chinese never changed in 5000 years)chinese is rich in the number of Adjectives, verbs, adverbs.
_________________ I am manchu , you know the manchus ? not important, we can be friends |
|
| Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:06 am |
|
 |
Riya
Forum Family Member


Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 6644 Location: Islamabad |
|
| |
|
hmmm....
nice one !
_________________
 |
|
| Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:30 am |
|
 |
SHUMULUSUYING
Full PK Member


Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 141 Location: China |
|
| |
|
 |
 |
hmmm....
nice one ! |
thank you , big sister . 
_________________ I am manchu , you know the manchus ? not important, we can be friends |
|
| Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:51 am |
|
 |
|
|
|