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jyoti
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doston, raat badi hasin hoti hai jb,aap or ham dinbhar ki thakan liye iske paas lautaten hai to apni bahen phaila kr vo hame apne gale se laga leti [b]hai,hamare maathe pr ek bosa bhar kr hame apne aagos me le kr hame sula deti hai lekin kabh-kabhi koi raat aise ruthti hai ki hamare chahane ke baad bhi hame nahi sula pati ..............
us raat aisa kya hua ki apko puri raat nind nahi aai or ap apne bistar pr karvate badalte rae or vo raat nikal gai..........
agar apne aisi koi raat bitai hai to likh dijye us raat ki kahani.................
दोस्तों, रात बड़ी हसीन होती है जब, आप और हम दिनभर की थकान लिए रात के पास लौटतें हैं तो अपनी बाहें फैला कर वो हमें अपने गले से लगा लेती है,माथे को चूमती है और फिर माथे को अपने गोद में रखकर हमें सुला देती है लेकिन कभी-कभी कोई ऐसी रुठती है की लाख चाहने पर भी हमारे पास नहीं आती..........
उस रात ऐसा क्या हुआ की आपको पूरी रात नींद नहीं आई? शायद आप अपने घर वालों को याद कर रहे थे. घर की,दरवाजे के ठीक बहार लगे पेड़ की जीस पे कभी आप खेला करते थे,कभी किसी से छुप जाते थे या गर्मी के दिनों में उस पेड़ के नीचे सूरज को चकमा दे देते थे.......
जी हाँ,कोई भी याद जिसने दी हो आवाज़, किसी रात .........
जिसने सरकाई हो कुण्डी,आपके मन की और दे गया हो दस्तक.........
लिख दीजिये आपनी ऐसी किसी रात की कहानी .................[/b]
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doston,
mai vikas hun,aapke pados me rahta hun or aaplogon ke saat aana chahta hun......
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Riya
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welcome to forumpakistan.com !!!
yeh laguage i think indian hai !! well... i think we idher Arsh ko hona chahiye hai ya aap hee isko roman main type kar do
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| Sat May 10, 2008 11:16 am |
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jyoti
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riya,
mai ise roman me likh dunga bt mai chahunga ki aap pale apne ko durust kr le. ye indian nahi hindi hai,kisi language ko apne pahchaan ke liye kisi desh ke name ki zarurat nahi hai.......
ye hindi hai or duniya ke kisi kone me koi bhi ise likh or bol sakta hai...........
mere kahne ka matlab,hindi keval indians ki nahi hai.............
aapka padosi
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mai vikas hun,aapke pados me rahta hun or aaplogon ke saat aana chahta hun...... |
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Riya
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well... it so good to see ur comments !!!
well... mera yeh matlab nahi tha mere kehnay ka matlab Hindi say hee tha jo maine indian likh dia aur dusri baat ke i m a pakistani and my language is Urdu so i can't understand it so that's why i ask u to translate it in roman coz i knew it that u can't speak urdu so that's why i ask for roman and here is no more difference in urdu and hindi they look similer to each other !!!
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jyoti
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well... it so good to see ur comments !!!
well... mera yeh matlab nahi tha mere kehnay ka matlab Hindi say hee tha jo maine indian likh dia aur dusri baat ke i m a pakistani and my language is Urdu so i can't understand it so that's why i ask u to translate it in roman coz i knew it that u can't speak urdu so that's why i ask for roman and here is no more difference in urdu and hindi they look similer to each other !!! |
ok riya.......
maine bh aapko batlane k liye likha tha or ki baat nahi hai.........
its ok........
ab y batlaao ki roman me samajh aa raha hai.......
to apne us raat ki kahani likh bhi do.......
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doston,
mai vikas hun,aapke pados me rahta hun or aaplogon ke saat aana chahta hun...... |
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Riya
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well... it so good to see ur comments !!!
well... mera yeh matlab nahi tha mere kehnay ka matlab Hindi say hee tha jo maine indian likh dia aur dusri baat ke i m a pakistani and my language is Urdu so i can't understand it so that's why i ask u to translate it in roman coz i knew it that u can't speak urdu so that's why i ask for roman and here is no more difference in urdu and hindi they look similer to each other !!! |
ok riya.......
maine bh aapko batlane k liye likha tha or ki baat nahi hai.........
its ok........
ab y batlaao ki roman me samajh aa raha hai.......
to apne us raat ki kahani likh bhi do....... |
well... Allah ka shuker hai ke aisa aaj tak kabhi hua nahi !! aur agay ka pata nahi !1
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jyoti
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| [b][i] aisi kya baat h gai[/b][/i] |
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well... it so good to see ur comments !!!
well... mera yeh matlab nahi tha mere kehnay ka matlab Hindi say hee tha jo maine indian likh dia aur dusri baat ke i m a pakistani and my language is Urdu so i can't understand it so that's why i ask u to translate it in roman coz i knew it that u can't speak urdu so that's why i ask for roman and here is no more difference in urdu and hindi they look similer to each other !!! |
ok riya.......
maine bh aapko batlane k liye likha tha or ki baat nahi hai.........
its ok........
ab y batlaao ki roman me samajh aa raha hai.......
to apne us raat ki kahani likh bhi do....... |
well... Allah ka shuker hai ke aisa aaj tak kabhi hua nahi !! aur agay ka pata nahi !1 |
ok riya ,apne likha hai ki iasme allah ka shukr hai......
lekin kuchh yaaden to achhi bhi hoti hain....
dost, mera manna hai ki kuchh raten agr in yaadon ke havale chali jaye to oi budai to nahi hai............
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doston,
mai vikas hun,aapke pados me rahta hun or aaplogon ke saat aana chahta hun...... |
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| Tue May 13, 2008 9:39 am |
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Riya
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well... it so good to see ur comments !!!
well... mera yeh matlab nahi tha mere kehnay ka matlab Hindi say hee tha jo maine indian likh dia aur dusri baat ke i m a pakistani and my language is Urdu so i can't understand it so that's why i ask u to translate it in roman coz i knew it that u can't speak urdu so that's why i ask for roman and here is no more difference in urdu and hindi they look similer to each other !!! |
ok riya.......
maine bh aapko batlane k liye likha tha or ki baat nahi hai.........
its ok........
ab y batlaao ki roman me samajh aa raha hai.......
to apne us raat ki kahani likh bhi do....... |
well... Allah ka shuker hai ke aisa aaj tak kabhi hua nahi !! aur agay ka pata nahi !1 |
ok riya ,apne likha hai ki iasme allah ka shukr hai......
lekin kuchh yaaden to achhi bhi hoti hain....
dost, mera manna hai ki kuchh raten agr in yaadon ke havale chali jaye to oi budai to nahi hai............ |
well... bro... her banday ki apni aik perception hoti hai aap ki perception kehti hai ke koi aik raat in yaado ko de deni chahiye hai aur meri perception yeh hai ke jab koi aisi yaad ya koi aisi baat he na ho to banda kis ke hawalay karay ??
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inayat khan qazi
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Take it easy Riya sister & listen:
DIN TO KAT JATA HE FURSAT ME KISI TARAH SE
RAAT AATI HE TO PHIR AA KE TEHER JATI HE
NEEND TO KHER IN AANKHOH KE MUQADAR ME NAHIH
KYA SHAB E GHAM ME KAHIH MOATH BI MAR JATHI HE
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Riya
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Take it easy Riya sister & listen:
DIN TO KAT JATA HE FURSAT ME KISI TARAH SE
RAAT AATI HE TO PHIR AA KE TEHER JATI HE
NEEND TO KHER IN AANKHOH KE MUQADAR ME NAHIH
KYA SHAB E GHAM ME KAHIH MOATH BI MAR JATHI HE |
Yeah Bro... i m relax but i was giving me opinions coz i did not faced any such kind of moments so how can i gave these moments to that night !!
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inayat khan qazi
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Riya sister,Its good to no know that you are relaxed.I don,t know why most of our men think of a woman as an object,whereas we should know there are different "ROOPS" of women & every ROOP/RISHTA should be duly respected.People born with complexes should be ignored.We should not forget our social Norms,moral values & origin.We should behave like A FAMILY in this Forum,we can exchange our views,feelings,thoughts etc in a very gentle,respectfull,caring & cosiderate manner."WUJOOD E ZAN SE HE TASWIR E KAINAAT ME RANG"
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jyoti
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namste,
aap done ne to mere Fourm ka mizaj hin nbadasl diya bt y achhi baat hai...........
jo baate apne bolin hain bakai aaj ke time me in baaton ko bolne vaale or dil se qabulne vaale logon ki kami s ho gai hai..........
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doston,
mai vikas hun,aapke pados me rahta hun or aaplogon ke saat aana chahta hun...... |
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