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Dua
Senior Proud Pakistani
Joined: 05 May 2007
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| Berbaad mohabbat ki dua sath lye ja |
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Berbaad mohabbat ki dua sath lye ja
Toota hua iqraar-e-wafa sath lye ja
Ek dil tha jo pahle hi tujhe sounp dya tha
Yeh jaan bhi aye jaan-e-adda sath lye ja
Taptee hui raahon say tujhe aanch na ponche
Dewaane ke ashkon ki ghata sath lye ja
Shamil hai mera khoon-e-jigar teri hina main
Yeh kam ho to ab khoon-e-wafa sath lye ja
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| Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:33 am |
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Miss jafri
Senior Proud Pakistani
Joined: 19 Feb 2008
Posts: 1091
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Nice .....
But dua i think ye aisay ziyada acha legay ga.....
Berbaad mohabbat ki dua sath Laita ja
Toota hua iqraar-e-wafa sath Laita ja
kia kehti ho....
its just a comment..
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| Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:37 am |
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Riya
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Joined: 05 May 2007
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Nice .....
But dua i think ye aisay ziyada acha legay ga.....
Berbaad mohabbat ki dua sath Laita ja
Toota hua iqraar-e-wafa sath Laita ja
kia kehti ho....
its just a comment.. |
good try miss jafri but i think i will be more suitable with lye ja coz when u sung it then it will give u a rythem
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| Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:45 am |
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Miss jafri
Senior Proud Pakistani
Joined: 19 Feb 2008
Posts: 1091
Location: Lahore |
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Nice .....
But dua i think ye aisay ziyada acha legay ga.....
Berbaad mohabbat ki dua sath Laita ja
Toota hua iqraar-e-wafa sath Laita ja
kia kehti ho....
its just a comment.. |
good try miss jafri but i think i will be more suitable with lye ja coz when u sung it then it will give u a rythem |
ok!!
it means its a song..... 
i have just comment on the rythem of poetry..
thanks
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| Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:52 am |
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aamirbutt
Senior Member Pakistani
Joined: 24 Nov 2007
Posts: 868
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very nice colloction
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| Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:51 am |
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aimenqazi
Full PK Member
Joined: 19 May 2008
Posts: 275
Location: US-CHI |
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| ankh say door na hoo |
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ankh se duur na ho dil se utar jaayegaa
vaqt kaa kyaa hai guzarataa hai guzar jaayegaa
itanaa maanuus na ho Khilvat-e-Gam se apanii
tuu kabhii Khud ko bhii dekhegaa to Dar jaayegaa
tum sar-e-raah-e-vafaa dekhate rah jaaoge
aur vo baam-e-rafaaqat se utar jaayegaa
zindagii terii ataa hai to ye jaanevaalaa
terii baKhshiish terii dahaliiz pe dhar jaayegaa
Duubate Duubate kashtii to ochhaalaa de duu.N
mai.n nahii.n ko_ii to saahil pe utar jaayegaa
zabt laazim hai magar dukh hai qayaamat kaa 'Faraz'
zaalim ab ke bhii na royegaa to mar jaayegaa
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