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inayat khan qazi
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Ye alag baat ke taqdeer lipat kar rohi
Warna bazoo tho thujhe dekh ke pehlaye the

Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:02 pm View user's profile Send private message
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یہ سرودِ قمری و بلبل فریب گوش ہے۔۔۔
باطن ہنگامہ آبادِ چمن خاموش ہے۔۔۔
تیرے پیمانوں کا ہے یہ اے مئے مغرب اثر۔۔۔
خندہ زن ساقی ہے، ساری انجمن بیہوش ہے۔۔۔

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bht muskil urdu hay Confused kya ap yeh poetry explain ker skte





In these verses Iqbal tries to explain the conflicts of principles in western culture;


Sarood e Qamri means Music by Moon, now there is a peculiar relationship between the nightingale (Bulbul) and moon, when there is a full moon a bulbul sings a song. So Iqbal in these lines explains the paradox of western culture giving similar examples that a nightingale is delusioned/confused while the music of the moon is touching the peaks,

Second line: he says that there is a revolution inside the garden but the whole garden i-e living being living in it are all quiet;


Third line: he says to west that it’s because of the level of effectiveness of your wines

Fourth line: that the drinker is happy and laughing (because if you drink you have a hang over next day and a headache and you just don’t feel right) but the people sitting around him seem to be drunk.


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Iqbal is probably trying to explain his own situation, that he being the real sinner (humility and he is being humble) but he is trying to show the righteous path to the nation that has gone astray (nation here is actually Anjuman (gathering) which has gone unconscious)
Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:36 am View user's profile Send private message
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memehak wrote:
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یہ سرودِ قمری و بلبل فریب گوش ہے۔۔۔
باطن ہنگامہ آبادِ چمن خاموش ہے۔۔۔
تیرے پیمانوں کا ہے یہ اے مئے مغرب اثر۔۔۔
خندہ زن ساقی ہے، ساری انجمن بیہوش ہے۔۔۔

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bht muskil urdu hay Confused kya ap yeh poetry explain ker skte





In these verses Iqbal tries to explain the conflicts of principles in western culture;


Sarood e Qamri means Music by Moon, now there is a peculiar relationship between the nightingale (Bulbul) and moon, when there is a full moon a bulbul sings a song. So Iqbal in these lines explains the paradox of western culture giving similar examples that a nightingale is delusioned/confused while the music of the moon is touching the peaks,

Second line: he says that there is a revolution inside the garden but the whole garden i-e living being living in it are all quiet;


Third line: he says to west that it’s because of the level of effectiveness of your wines

Fourth line: that the drinker is happy and laughing (because if you drink you have a hang over next day and a headache and you just don’t feel right) but the people sitting around him seem to be drunk.


Summary:


Iqbal is probably trying to explain his own situation, that he being the real sinner (humility and he is being humble) but he is trying to show the righteous path to the nation that has gone astray (nation here is actually Anjuman (gathering) which has gone unconscious)


bhot sa thx ugwaraich jee lykin itne bhot late anyhow phir se bhot sa thx deti apko



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inayat khan qazi wrote:
Ye alag baat ke taqdeer lipat kar rohi
Warna bazoo tho thujhe dekh ke pehlaye the


yehi saza hay meri ab say umer bhar kay liye...
Kay wo nazar bhi aye to sirf khayalo main


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inayat khan qazi
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Thanx memehak for your Khushboo,

Nazar me karb laboh pe shikayateh thi bohat
wo din gaye ke dilloh me muhabbateh thi bohat
Mila jo aaj tho mausam ki baath karne laga
Ye aur baath ke dil me hakayateh thi bohat
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u r most welcome inayat khan qazi jee Razz

Tum apnay khayalat mujhey sonp ker dekho
Her shakhs amanat mein khiyanat nahin kerta


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u r most welcome inayat khan qazi jee Razz

Tum apnay khayalat mujhey sonp ker dekho
Her shakhs amanat mein khiyanat nahin kerta



aao ik sajda karien hum alam-e-madhoshi main
loag kehtay hain ke saghar ko khuda yaad nahi


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Yeh dastoor-e-zabaa-n bandi hai kaisa teri mehfil may
Yaha-n to baat kernay ko terasti hai zabaa-n meri


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یہ دنیا دعوتِ دیدار ہے فرزندِ آدم کو۔۔۔
کہ ہر مستور کو بخشا گیا ہے زوقِ عریانی۔۔

یہی فرزندِ آدم ہے کہ جس کے اشکِ خونی سے۔۔۔
کیا ہے حضرتِ یزداں نے، دریاوُں کو طوفانی۔۔۔

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Yahah bhi aks hain tootti huwi chittanoh ke
Nadeem zaat ke pathaal me uttar kar dekho

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وہ حسن کیا جو محتاج چشم بینا ہو۔۔۔
نمود کے لئے منت پزیر فردا ہو۔۔۔


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teray jane k baad hum ne
her ghari teray saath guzari hai
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وہ حسن کیا جو محتاج چشم بینا ہو۔۔۔
نمود کے لئے منت پزیر فردا ہو۔۔۔


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Woh Khatam Qaid ki Miyad Bhi Nahi Kerta
Aur Main Zehmat-e-Faryad Bhi Nahi Kerta
Kabhi Kabhi Woh Muje Itna Yaad Ata Hai "FARAZ"
Kay Main Zid Mein Aa Ker Usay Yaad Bhi Nahi Kerta


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Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Jaise kisi kitaab mein
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Khat ik para huwa miley
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Yaqeen heh k na aaye ga muj sey milney koi
Tu phir yeh Dil ko meray intizaar kaisa heh
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yoon tou her shaam umeedon main guzar jaati thii,
ajj kuch baat hay jo sham pay rona aaya
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الٰہی عقلِ خجستہ پے کوزرا سی دیوانگی سکھا دے۔۔۔
اسے ہے سودائے بخیہ کاری ، مجھے سرِ پیرہن نہیں ہے۔۔۔

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الٰہی عقلِ خجستہ پے کوزرا سی دیوانگی سکھا دے۔۔۔
اسے ہے سودائے بخیہ کاری ، مجھے سرِ پیرہن نہیں ہے۔۔۔

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Yaad-e-Maazi Ajab hai Ya Rab
Cheen le mujhse Hafza Mera........ Shocked


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Aansuon mein na dhoondna hamein
Dil me hum bas jaayenge
Tamanna ho agar milne ki
to bund aankhon me nazar aayenge
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Ye kis shoakh ne baal bakhereh hain
Raqs me hanbareeh andhere hain

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inayat khan qazi wrote:
Ye kis shoakh ne baal bakhereh hain
Raqs me hanbareeh andhere hain


noon say aik bahut mashahoor shayer ka aik sheer

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Na janay mairay dil ko kia ho gya
abhi to yaheen tha abhi khoo gaya...
ho gya hai tujh ko to pyar sajnaa ...lakh kar lay to inkar sajnaa


sorry guys currently could'nt think of any sheer with noon............
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inayat khan qazi wrote:
Ye kis shoakh ne baal bakhereh hain
Raqs me hanbareeh andhere hain


noon say aik bahut mashahoor shayer ka aik sheer

wrote:
Na janay mairay dil ko kia ho gya
abhi to yaheen tha abhi khoo gaya...
ho gya hai tujh ko to pyar sajnaa ...lakh kar lay to inkar sajnaa


sorry guys currently could'nt think of any sheer with noon............


No problem i am with you. so we will start from Noon

na ga.Nvaao naavak-e-niim-kash, dil-e-rezaa-rezaa ga.Nvaa diyaa
jo bache hai.n sang samaiT loo, tan-e-daaG-daaG luTaa diyaa


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Iss liye kuch loag hum se jalthe hain
Ke ji jalaane me kyu ikhtiyar apna he
Kahi mila tho kissi din mana hi lehnge usse
Wo zoodranj sahih phir bhi yaar apna he

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Jo ehl-e-zar'f hootay hain hamesha jhuk kay miltay hain
Surahi sar nagoon ho kar bharaa karti hai paimaanay.

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Iss say pahlay keh bewafa hojaen
Keon na aye dost hum juda hojaen

Tu bhi heeray say hogaya patthar
Hum bhi kal janay keya say keya hojaen
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