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shakeelmscw
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Here you can request for complete shair,
Mostly peoples have some lines of shairs in there minds but forget the complete one.
so here you can request to complete those shairs.
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shakeelmscw
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1st one i need to complete this
I forget the 1st line of this shair, please complete this(i think this shair is from Qateel Shaffai but not sure)
Tera Qashqool acha hai, Tera Tarzay Gaddai khubbsurat hai
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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| Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:13 am |
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khashkool le ke aapke aadhe kashkool wala sher doonda par.... 
ab to mein yahi kahooonga...
Kashkool liye bheek na maangain ge khushi ki
Ab ke baras yeh dua hai tera saamna na ho 
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shakeelmscw
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khashkool le ke aapke aadhe kashkool wala sher doonda par....
ab to mein yahi kahooonga...
Kashkool liye bheek na maangain ge khushi ki
Ab ke baras yeh dua hai tera saamna na ho |
Thanks dear, but someone will must find the proper one, so i will wait...
however if you have any uncomplete, then post here
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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Dua
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hmm that's very help ful topic for Poets
Thnx Shakeel
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Riya
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bro.. i have a request
chand bhi ain cheet ka uspe tera malal bhi
yeh parween shakir ki aik ghazal ka shair hai agar kisi ko pata hai to plz mujhe yeh complete kar dien !!!
i willl wait for it
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shakeelmscw
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bro.. i have a request
chand bhi ain cheet ka uspe tera malal bhi
yeh parween shakir ki aik ghazal ka shair hai agar kisi ko pata hai to plz mujhe yeh complete kar dien !!!
i willl wait for it |
Please let me know, is it same one ?
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khyaal bhi dil ko khushi k saath saath hota raha mallal bhi
baat who aadhi raat ki raat thi poore chand ki chaand bhi aein ched tha us pe tera Jamaal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhi
sab se nazar bacha k woh mujh ko tha aise dekhta aik dafa toa ruk gai gardish e mah o saal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhi
us ko na pa sakey they jab dil ka ajeeb haal thaa hum jo palat k dekhte baat thi kuch muhaal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhidil ko khushi k saath saath hota raha mallal bhi
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Riya
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bro.. i have a request
chand bhi ain cheet ka uspe tera malal bhi
yeh parween shakir ki aik ghazal ka shair hai agar kisi ko pata hai to plz mujhe yeh complete kar dien !!!
i willl wait for it |
Please let me know, is it same one ?
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khyaal bhidil ko khushi k saath saath hota raha mallal bhi
baat who aadhi raat ki raat thi poore chand ki chaand bhi aein ched tha us pe tera Jamaal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhi
sab se nazar bacha k woh mujh ko tha aise dekhta aik dafa toa ruk gai gardish e mah o saal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhi
us ko na pa sakey they jab dil ka ajeeb haal thaab jo palat k dekhte baat thi kuch muhaal bhi
kuch toa hawa bhi sard thi kuch that era khyaal bhidil ko khushi k saath saath hota raha mallal bhi |
Thnx Shakeel bro.. its same
thnx for the complement !
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Riya
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i have one more request
plz complete this one
mere nasib ki barishain kisi or chat per baras gain
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shakeelmscw
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i have one more request
plz complete this one
mere nasib ki barishain kisi or chat per baras gain |
kahan akay ruknay thay raastay kahan mor tha usay bhool jaa
woh jo mil gaya usay yaad rekh jo nahi mila usay bhool ja
woh tere naseeb ki barishain kisi aur chat pe baras gayn
dil-e- baykhabar meri baat sun usay bhool ja usay bhool ja
main to gum tha terey hi dhiyan main , teri aas tery guman main
saba keh gayi meray kaan main , merey sath aa usay bhool ja
kisi aankh main nahi ashk-e-ghum, terey baad kuch b nahi hai kam
tujhey zindagi nay bhula diya,,tu b muskura usay bhool ja...
kiyon ata hua hai ghubar main, gham-e-zindagi kay fishar main
woh jo darj tha terey bakht main, so woh ho gaya... usay bhool ja
na woh aankh hi teri aankh thi na woh khawab hi tera khawab tha
dil-e-muntazir to yeh kis lye... tera jaagna ... usay bhool ja
yeh jo raat din ka hai khail sa... isay daikh is pe yaqeen na ker
nahi aks koi b mustaqil, sir-e-aina .. usay bhool ja
jo basat-e-jaan hi ulat gaya .. woh jo rastay main palat gaya
usay roknay say hasool kya .. usay mat bula .. usay bhool jaaa
tujhe chaand ban ke milaa tha jo tere saahilon pe khilaa tha jo
wo tha ek dariya visaal ka so utar gaya use bhool jaa
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shakeelmscw
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1st one i need to complete this
I forget the 1st line of this shair, please complete this(i think this shair is from Qateel Shaffai but not sure)
Tera Qashqool acha hai, Tera Tarzay Gaddai khubbsurat hai |
I am still waiting...
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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| Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:55 pm |
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Arre Shakeel seriously bahut try ki but nahi mil saka....
Still trying... lets see if we can help out our Teacher....
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shakeelmscw
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Arre Shakeel seriously bahut try ki but nahi mil saka....
Still trying... lets see if we can help out our Teacher.... |
It is really circulating in my mind, please complete it asap.
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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shakeelmscw
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Arre Shakeel seriously bahut try ki but nahi mil saka....
Still trying... lets see if we can help out our Teacher.... |
It is really circulating in my mind, please complete it asap. |
There is one more request
Dithi main ikk Hoor meray wall paillan pandi aaway, Please post that one. i am waiting...
dithi mean nazzir aii waikhi
Wohh khawab wali
Dithi main ikk Hoor meray wall paillan pandi aaway
ikk nazar mastani jiss dii lakh bhalaikhy paaway
akher main hoorain kehti hain kay Jannet vich election honna aain Vote sannon he ppanna
Yeh ussi shair ki hai jiss nay likhi thi Too kii jannain pooliaay majjay Annarkali diyan shanna
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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shakeelmscw
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shakeelmscw
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1st one i need to complete this
I forget the 1st line of this shair, please complete this(i think this shair is from Qateel Shaffai but not sure)
Tera Qashqool acha hai, Tera Tarzay Gaddai khubbsurat hai |
I am still waiting... |
But this one is still pending...
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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listened to it very funny thanks for sharing
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shakeelmscw
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listened to it very funny thanks for sharing |
Thank you too
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Miss jafri
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Any body has this full poem....???
us ka aik shair hi hay meray pass
poocha jo unsay chaand nikalta hay kis terha
zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun...
plz mai kaafi arsay say dhoond rehi hun..
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Any body has this full poem....???
us ka aik shair hi hay meray pass
poocha jo unsay chaand nikalta hay kis terha
zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun...
plz mai kaafi arsay say dhoond rehi hun.. |
Mery pass hey..laikun app ko to pata hey her cheecz kee ik keemat hoti hey!!! 
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Any body has this full poem....???
us ka aik shair hi hay meray pass
poocha jo unsay chaand nikalta hay kis terha
zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun...
plz mai kaafi arsay say dhoond rehi hun.. |
Mery pass hey..laikun app ko to pata hey her cheecz kee ik keemat hoti hey!!! |
I THINK U GOT I MIXED UP THAT CANT BE APOEM "zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun"
i THINK ITS THIS ONE
JO POOCHA KY KIS TARHE HOTI HY BAARISH
JABEEN SY PASEENY KI BOONDAIN GIRA DEEN
JO POOCHA KY KIS TARHE GIRTI HY BIJLI
NIGAHAIN MILAIN MILA KAR JHUKA DEEN
JO POOCHA KY SHAB-O-ROZ MILTY HAIN KAISY
CHEHRY PY APNY WOH ZULFAIN GIURA DEEN
JO POOCHA KY NAGHMON MAIN JAADU HY KAISA
TO MEETHY TAKALLUM MAIN BAATAIN SUNA DEEN
JO APNI TAMANNAON KA HAL POOCHA
TO JALTI HUI CHAND SHAMIN BUJHA DEEN
MAIN KEHTA REH GAYA HATA-E-MUHABBAT KI ACHI SAZA DI
MERY DIL KI DUNYA BANA KAR MITA
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shakeelmscw
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Any body has this full poem....???
us ka aik shair hi hay meray pass
poocha jo unsay chaand nikalta hay kis terha
zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun...
plz mai kaafi arsay say dhoond rehi hun.. |
I found something similar, but not sure it is same ghazal
Acha Khaasa baithey baithey "Gum" Ho jaata hoon
Ab Mein aksar "Mein" nahin rehta, "Tum" ho Jaata hoon
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Apni Zaat ke mehwar mein tujhey Zum kar loon
Ibaadaton mein tera Ishq bhi raqam kar loon
Terey Ashkon se ho agar "Wazoo" na-mumkin
Mein terey Jissm Ki Matti se "Tayamum" kar loon
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Poocha Jo UNN Se Chaand Nikalta hai kiss tarha?
Zulfon ko rukh pe daal ke jhatka diya ke YOON
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«´¨`·.Shakeel Ahmed ..·´¨`»
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Miss jafri
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Any body has this full poem....???
us ka aik shair hi hay meray pass
poocha jo unsay chaand nikalta hay kis terha
zulfon ko rukh pay daal k jhatka dia k yun...
plz mai kaafi arsay say dhoond rehi hun.. |
I found something similar, but not sure it is same ghazal
Acha Khaasa baithey baithey "Gum" Ho jaata hoon
Ab Mein aksar "Mein" nahin rehta, "Tum" ho Jaata hoon
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Apni Zaat ke mehwar mein tujhey Zum kar loon
Ibaadaton mein tera Ishq bhi raqam kar loon
Terey Ashkon se ho agar "Wazoo" na-mumkin
Mein terey Jissm Ki Matti se "Tayamum" kar loon
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Poocha Jo UNN Se Chaand Nikalta hai kiss tarha?
Zulfon ko rukh pe daal ke jhatka diya ke YOON |
yay to apnay mera wala shair hi likh ker post ker dia hay...
i wanna whole gazal....
one more shair is almost like this
Poocha jo unsay dil ko jalatay hain kis terha
pehluey gair mai baith ker betla di k yun....
daikh lai mai nay aik or shair bta diia hay kuch isi terha ki gazal hay wo....
means poocha jo unsay ki wording say start hota hay her shair..
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I found something similar, but not sure it is same ghazal
Acha Khaasa baithey baithey "Gum" Ho jaata hoon
Ab Mein aksar "Mein" nahin rehta, "Tum" ho Jaata hoon
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Apni Zaat ke mehwar mein tujhey Zum kar loon
Ibaadaton mein tera Ishq bhi raqam kar loon
Terey Ashkon se ho agar "Wazoo" na-mumkin
Mein terey Jissm Ki Matti se "Tayamum" kar loon
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Poocha Jo UNN Se Chaand Nikalta hai kiss tarha?
Zulfon ko rukh pe daal ke jhatka diya ke YOON |
yay to apnay mera wala shair hi likh ker post ker dia hay...
i wanna whole gazal....
one more shair is almost like this
Poocha jo unsay dil ko jalatay hain kis terha
pehluey gair mai baith ker betla di k yun....
daikh lai mai nay aik or shair bta diia hay kuch isi terha ki gazal hay wo....
means poocha jo unsay ki wording say start hota hay her shair.. |
poocha jo oon sy ky chand nikla hy kes taraha
baloon ko rukh py dal ker jatka dya ky youn...
qatra qatra bane samandar... aikdo sher aor mil jaye to aapki gazal mukammal hojaegi
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Miss jafri
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poocha jo oon sy ky chand nikla hy kes taraha
baloon ko rukh py dal ker jatka dya ky youn...
qatra qatra bane samandar... aikdo sher aor mil jaye to aapki gazal mukammal hojaegi |
Iqbal bhai ap b na bas...........
des dfa aik hi shair likh ker gazal pooori ker laitay hain
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